Name : Lil Daisy
Story Title :Blue Stars
Fanfic URL :http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/bluestars/
Reviewer : Zara @ Mystery-Cious
Title: 5/5: Blue Stars is a really cute, it’s simple but beautiful, it can lure the readers in to reading it. good!
Poster/Background: 10/10: the poster is really pretty, you picked good pictures of T.O.P with his hair down and also the girl looks good to! the font also blends in the genre. the Background of cherry blossoms really brings out more of the drama.
Forewords: 10/10: it’s really good, the forewords that you’ve written are very professional. very descriptive and you’ve used complex words which gives out an idea that the fanfic will be dramatic. you introduced the characters well and described them in depth. keep it up!
Plot: 15/15: the plot of two lover with years apart is really creative. many twists and problems can be produced by it. it will really be nail biting.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10: this story is not like many of the love stories out there. you are pointing out the differences of the characters well, the way they talk in their time and the different style of clothing they wear, you also includes the things that they do during that time and the present day. you also used some quotes about love, about God, also includes science and the different kinds of O stars. Great!
Flow: 10/10: the flow of you fanfic is great, everything is well described and all the readers need is imagination.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10: there are no spelling mistakes and as i have said before, you have used descriptive and complex words to make the fic more alive.
Characterization: 10/10: the characters are a good choice, making the characters chart makes it even more helpful, so that some new readers won’t get confused on who is who.
Writing Style: 10/10: I’m glad that you didn’t use scripts, instead you used story style language with connectives. using this makes it even more professional and easy to understand.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5: i enjoyed it and will be waiting for what will happen next. i am sure that your reader will be waiting for more too. keep it up!
Bonus: 5/5: using T.O.P from big bang is a bonus, he is a great rapper and actor, he also suits the character. RyeoWoon’s also suits it’s character well, gentle but has a wild side.
Total: 100/100
i think I’m too nice, but i really can’t find anything wrong with it..
