Title: Dedicated
Author: ctanonymous
Link: http://winglin.net/fanfic/ctanonymous_4/
Reviewed by: for3v3r @ http://mystery-cious.blogspot.com
Title: 9/10
It’s a completely different title and it certainly catches my attention.
Poster/Background: 9/10
I love your poster! It matches exactly with the mood of the story!
Forewords: 8/10
It’s quite well done. Maybe you could hide the fact that Arron is going to win Hebe back and let the readers find out themselves.
Plot: 13/15
The plot is quite interesting especially the part where Arron’s competition is held on Valentine’s Day.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I spot some mistakes here and there but not a major mistake.
Creativity/Originality: 12/15
One part of the story is quite common – Arron sings song and got Hebe back. This is too common. Maybe you can think of a different way for Arron to get back Hebe like making food for her.
Writing Style: 9/10
I love your style of writing. It depicts very well of what is going on and how the characters are feeling at that certain point of time.
Flow of story: 9/10
The whole story is flowing very well except for the part where Hebe said both of them missed each other when she don’t know how Arron is feeling. It does not make sense
Characters used: 4/5
I support Bebu! 
Bebu fanfic are getting lesser and lesser. 
Write more Bebu fanfics! ^^
Overall enjoyment: 4/ 5
I enjoyed the whole story. Keep up the good work!
Total: 87/100
