Name : Janelle Moran
Story Title :King of Hearts
Fanfic URL :http://winglin.net/fanfic/jam_023/
Reviewer : for3v3r
Title: 4/5
It is very interesting title which I have never come across before.
Poster/Background: 9/10
I love your poster! It is very interesting and it certainly brings out the story.
Forewords: 9/10
Well done! It is the best forewords I had ever read. You gave a very good description of both the characters’ background and the story.
Plot: 13/15
The whole story is well-plotted. The way you organized everything is just right.
Creativity/Originality: 9/10
Frankly, I had never read this kind of story before. It is a novel idea and I hope to see you coming up with interesting ideas in the future! ^^
Flow: 9/10
There are no loopholes and the story is going at a right pace, not too fast, not too slow. Good job for that.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
I did not spot any major mistake, just some minor mistakes here and there.
Characterisation: 9/10
You develop your characters’ feelings and actions very well. Well Done!
Writing Style: 8/10
I like the way you write, it explains everything which requires me to know.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I enjoyed your story very much.
Bonus: 5/5
It is one of the best I had ever read.
Total: 87/100
Comments : Well done! I hope to see more works from you! ^^
