Author: Pink Princess
Fanfic URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/PinkPrincess11
Status: Completed
Reviewer: sweet_yunjae @ mystery-cious
Title: 5/5
The point of the story matches with the title. Very Good.
Poster/Background: 10/10
Your poster is somewhat dark and mysterious. But yes, it shows sadness.
Forewords: 10/10
You included a lot of details.
Plot: 15/15
Very interesting and meaningful.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
This story is very creative. Especially the quote.
Flow: 9/10
Your flow seems to be missing something. Add more about what happened when Ri In found out about Junsu’s death.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I had notice some spelling and grammar.
Characterization: 9/10
You described Junsu well but I would like to know more about Ri In and Yunho.
Writing Style: 10/10
Very advanced and unique.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I actually cried. Yes, I am very sensitive when it comes to these things. Only a few stories made me cry so I guess Good Job!:D
Bonus: 5/5
I LOVE it(: It is very interesting and it leave me wanting more.
Total: 97/100
