Author: Khlaren
Fanfic URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/PinkPrincess12
Reviewer: Khlaren @ mystery-cious
Title: 5/5: the title is creative yet simple at the same time. readers wonder what it is about and it also relates to the ending.
Poster/Background: 9/10: i like your background and poster as it relates to the story well, the girls face is a little bit hard to see, but other than that. it’s cute!
Forewords: 8/10: it is great! and from reading the first few lines, the readers will get a cute feeling because of the ice-cream incident then suddenly have the change when they read about the car crash…they will have the idea of drama, romance in the fic with lures them in more. although i got a little confused when she cried because he wanted her to kiss him, however you have explained her feeling towards him after and connected it well.
Plot: 15/15: as i have said about the title before, it is creative yet simple, also has the romance drama and mystery feeling towards the chapters. there are not many chapters but it still left the readers a satisfying ending. it has dramatic scenes and the way you have described it was great! your English is 5 star! the idea of the code being A-N-N-A was very good, it is simple yet hard to figure out. i suspect even the readers didn’t see that coming.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10: personally i have never anything like yours before and it very refreshing to me. the idea of a secret code and full faith on each other have a me a warm feeling and hoping that she would figure it out. its unique and full of romance.
Flow: 8/10: it was very well explained and constructed, although sometimes i didn’t know who’s point of view it was, sometime it would have ‘I’ and ‘Me’ but the after a few more sentences, there’s ‘She’ and ‘He’..and i get confused if it was Anna’s, Sungmin’s or the narrator’s POV.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10: it was perfect and well structured, you have also included rhetorical questions for the readers to wonder about which a really good technique. 
complex words are also included which can make just a simple sentence so dramatic
Characterization: 9/10: it is just simple, i am glad that you didn’t use too much characters in the fic and just focused on the 2 lovers. a friend was helpful in the the story and gave it a little bit of tension, when leeteuk told him that she’s leaving… sungmin would never have known if it wasn’t for him
Writing Style: 10/10: your writing style is something that i adore, i only wish that i could write like you…:D every single sentence makes sense and you made the speeches very clear.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5: i have enjoyed reading your short yet satisfying story and i hope to read more form you soon..:D
Bonus: 4/5: you have included songs to relate to the chapters and that is big bonus, it makes it more dramatic and the readers imaginations can function better.
Total: 93/100
