Author: Kawaii_love
Fan Fiction URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/TTOF
Status: On Going
Reviewer: Khlaren @ Mystery-Cious
Title: 5/5
I think your title is good and it matches the story really well. I don’t know if it’s intentional, but it made me feel like Songeun is asking Jaebum to choose between his career and their love. You did a great job with your title.
Poster/Background: 8/10
The poster is also good. It gives people a melancholic feel. (Or maybe just me:p) As for your background, I think it could have looked better.
Forewords: 8/10
Your forewords made me curious about the whole story, and I think it’s a good thing because just with your forewords, you already attract attention. And also, your word selection in your forewords is so good that I almost felt Songeun’s misery.
Plot: 13/15
Your plot is great! I love it to bits and it’s just seriously nice to read. I can see that you’ve thought about the plot very well. I loved how you made the kidnapper the one who gave 2PM’s address to Songeun and how you matched the events so perfectly.
I just think that bashing someone in a mall or an airport is weird because there are supposed to be guards right? Plus, if you enter an airport, guards check your things to see if you have offensive materials with you.. And Eunmi had one, right?
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
Your plot is very original and I like it; though I also think the kidnapping part is a little too cliché. But other than that, it’s good. Your creativity showed a lot in this story and I can say that you really are a good writer.
Flow: 8.5/10
I had a few problems with the flow. Some parts were a bit too fast; like you transfer from one scene to another too quickly. Good thing is it didn’t really mess with my enjoyment that much.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 7.5/10
I found a few misspelled words and a small number of grammatical errors. Your vocabulary is great but you can still improve. I also found sentences with wrong punctuations.
Characterization: 9/10
As I’ve said, your word selection made me feel Songeun’s grief. And I think it’s great because you don’t just write sad scenes, you also make readers feel the sadness your characters feel.
Writing Style: 9/10
At first, I got confused with your writing style but as I read more of your chapters, I got used to it and started loving how you write. I swear you make funny scenes way funnier with your style!
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! 
I hardly give perfect score here, haha. Seriously. I read this from 11:25 pm to 2:45 am (You can say I’m a slow reader but I hardly finish stories on one go! Plus, I have to look closely for mistakes and such.) and I can’t stop squealing and laughing. And I swear I wanted to kick Jaebum’s ass when you made him ignore Songeun! lol.
Bonus: 5/5
Five points bonus for talking to your readers and for making me stay up all night! Errr, I hope you didn’t get the Swine Flu
Total: 86/100
Reviewer’s note: Your fanfic is great and I GUESS this is the highest score I’ve given ever since I started doing reviews. Good job! 
