Author: Auby
Status: one-shots
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Auby/
Reviewer: candycane @ mysterycious
Title: 4/5
Weird and odd title but it was related to the story. Somehow it suited the story and the title was kinda out of the blue…anyways good job pn picking the title.
Poster/Background: 2/10
You didn’t have a poster so I couldn’t make a comment on it and your background was very plain. You should have gotten a better a nicer background. Your background should have consist of your characters and same goes for your poster.
Forewords: 3 /10
Your forwards only introduced the characters names, nothing about the characters.
Plot : 11 /15
It was very predictable, try writing more random events to surprise readers.
Creativity/Originality: 7 /10
Your story is very common but the marraige thing was very unrealistic.
Flow: 8/10
I think you did quite a good job although it may be a little unrealistic but all writers have their own imagination. Your writing is very impressive and I must say I’m really glad to review your fanfic. Keep up the good work!!!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary:9/10
You have great grammar skills. There weren’t many mistakes throughout the whole chapters. Congrats on that!!!
Characterisation:6/10
Since its a one- shot, there’s nothing much to comment and you did manage to bring out the main character
Writing Style: 8 /10
I like how you write and describe your story. You wrote the story really well!! I hope you will keep up the good job!! Excellent job!!
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I enjoy your fanfic overall. Good job!!! Keep up the excellent work!!
Bonus: 5/5
Excellent work overall!!!
Total: 67/100
