Title: 5/5: wow! The name itself brought in a very cheerful but mysterious feeling towards the story. When I saw it I was like ‘Love Installation? This sounds interesting…’ and it really was! I was satisfied at the turn out of the chapter.
Poster/Background: 10/10: the poster was simple and attractive. It really made my pop (metaphorically)! The cherry red was really a great colour to use, along with the rose and hearts. The background blended along well with the poster too! The darkness made the mysterious side to it. Nobody would have thought about ‘Installing Love’.
Forewords: 10/10: this really made me a little confused, I was wondering what the heck is this all about? Because I have never encountered something like this in my reviewer life XD and trust me, it is a very good thing! You have included the vital information in there like the Genre and Disclaimer, Also, with the advertisements of your other works.
Plot: 15/15: this was a very short story but it was very satisfying, the plot was very different from the other fanfic out there. It is a very creative original idea that does not just pop into your head. It is simple and yet understandable in all prospects.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10: as I have mentioned before, this is very new and refreshing to me in a very good way. It is very different form all the others I have read, it’s very original and creative with a hint of quirkiness ^_^ no one would have thought about installing ‘LOVE’ into your ‘HEART’ treating our organs or feelings as technical equipments and software’s are getting into the century. I mean, everything is getting technical these days; I would not be surprised if this can be done in the next 100 years.
Flow: 10/10: it was smooth without any bumps on the road; it is beautifully explained and straight onto the main point of the story. Great job!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10: there are no spelling mistakes except for one that can slip through anyone’s eyes ‘RealizationOfWoth.txt.’ I think it was supposed to be RealizationOfWorth. But you grammar and vocabulary is great! It was mostly speech so you needn’t need to use much of those. ^_^
Characterization: 10/10: it was simple and it didn’t need names or anything. The way you have written it is completely understandable. The conversation between the representative and the client was self explanatory.
Writing Style: 10/10: I saw that most of the story is focused on a phone conversation between the client and he representative, and I am glad that you didn’t use script style of writing for it. As reviewer, I am not a fan of script style. XD
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5: it was short but it was enough for me to smile in the end of reading it. Great Job!
Bonus: 5/5: I will give you a bonus for letting me read this amazing one shot!
Total: 100/100
Zara Note: this is the second one I’ve given perfect scores to and you deserve it! I hope that you will write more creative ideas in the future.
