Name :uphoria109
Email :jen7blue@gmail.com
Story Title :It’s You
Fanfic URL :http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/uphoria109/
Reviewer : Candycane @ Mystery-Cious
Title: 5/5
Your title is so sweet!!! It really caught my attention!!! Plus, it totally suited your story!!!!
Poster/Background: 8/10
Your poster is really cool. It really brings out the characters features!!! Your background on the otherhand is very simple. I think it suited the mood you were trying to convey and the font colour suited the
background..yay!!
Forewords: 6/10
I didn’t quite get what you were trying to convey. Sorry!! Besides you didn’t mention about the characters you were going to write!!! 
Try describing the characters more!!
Plot: 12/15
Your plot is sweet and unique. It is simple which makes it nice and good. It brings out the emotion of the characters!!!
Creativity/Originality: 9/10
Nice work, because I think its really creative and original. You manage to explain the story in a simple and clear way. Way to go!!!
Flow: 10/10
Like I said, its simple and easy to understand. You brought out the emotion you were trying to convey and was really successful. You manage to connect the story al the way!! I give you two thumbs up!!!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 5/10
There were spelling and grammar mistakes everywhere. Not to be harsh, since this is your first fanfic, its understandable. I really hope you can try improving on this section. Take time rereading your story after you finish typing it!!!
Characterisation: 4/10
You didn’t describe your charaters in depth. It was very unstable the whole way through. A good story would have a great plot, great writing style, originality and good characterisation. You need to explain and describe more on your characters. Readers would then understand your story better.
Writing Style: 8/10
There were too many POV. It made the story very confussing and messy. Try a simpler form and focus on just a few main POV.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Total: 77/100
Woah!!! A really impressive mark for a first timer. My advise is try just writing in a few POV, describe more of your characters and reread your stiry before posting it. Otherwise, Excellent Job!!! Your scores are great for this being your first fanfic. Keep up the good work!!! Hope to see improvement soon!!! I believe in you!! Good Luck!!!
