Name:keerain
Email : hottiemagic@gmail.com
Story Title :Like Butterflies;
Fanfic URL :http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/keepea8ight/
Reviewer : Candycane @ Mystery-Cious
Title: 5/5
It was really unexpected. Your title was so random, no offense. But somehow, it totally suited your story!!! So weird!!!
Poster/Background: 9/10
I think your poster really brings out the mood you are trying to convey to readers. Your background was also very sweet and simple. It really suited the mood and your story!! I give you thumbs up for that!!
Forewords: 7/10
Your forewords were really catchy and interesting. I was immediately caught on when I started reading it. But you should have explain more about your characters in your forewords so readers would know what it was more likely about.
Plot: 12/15
It was average because I read a story with almost the same plot like yours. You could have wrote more interesting and dramatic scences. Anyways at least, you did put in effort in writing it!! 
Creativity/Originality: 7/10
The plot was kinda common so there’s nothing much to comment. But the way you describe the story was really unusual yet beautiful!! Try thinking of more of your own original ideas.
Flow: 8/10
You did a really great job. The story connected the whole way and I am impressed. I really adore the way you describe and write your story, its just sometmes I don’t really get what you are trying to convey. It is so different than normal writers that write their story.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 6/10
There were a few mistakes along the way. Everyone has mistakes so I know you could do better.
Characterisation: 7/10
You could have describe your characters in more depth. Since your story is not very long, I think its kinda reasonable. Next time, try describing more on your characters, readers would be able to understand and enjoy more.
Writing Style: 9/10
You used your own style of writing and made it to your own story. Really Good!! I really like how you wrote your story.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Total: 80/100
Great job!!! All you need to improve on is your characterisation and try making your characters POV clearer. Keep up the good work!!!
