Name :BoBoLi0us
Email :christina_95xu@hotmail.com
Story Title :End of A Dream
Fanfic URL :www.winglin.net/fanfic/EndofAdream/
Status :Completed
Reviewer : candycane
Title: 5/5
The title is so unique. It is original and suits your story perfectly. It conveys the mood, the sad and depressing mood. Great Job!!!!
Poster/Background: 10/10
Your poster and background totally suited the mood of your story. I can imagine it just by looking at the poster the type of feeling you were trying to express. It’s really simple and brings out the meaning of the story really well.
Forewords: 9/10
I really enjoyed reading your forewords. It was interesting and had led me wanting to read more of your story. Your prologue is amazing, it really reaches the readers. You described the characters really well, bringing out the mood of your story.
Plot: 15/15
Your plot is really good. It was so sad that I was close to tears. I love reading sad fanfics because you really get to understand and imagine the feeling they have gone through. Your plot was unique and really amazing; it made the reader wanting to read more. It was exhilarating and exciting. The ending was superb. Most writers would make their ending a happy one, but yours is totally different!!! I love your plot!!!!
Creativity/Originality: 7/10
I really love your fanfic!!! It was original and unique. You totally made the fanfic your own!! But the dating, leaving and two- timing thing was kinda common…and how she needed to start a new beginning and would end up meeting again and how she couldn’t forget him…
Flow: 9/10
It was amazing. You didn’t focus on one timeline. You wrote the story in the past and present!!! SUPERB!! Your whole story went really well, it had links here and there!!! Great Work!!!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I hate this section!! Everybody would have at least a teensy spelling or grammar error. You had some along the way but just a few. I’m really amazed at your work. Your vocabulary was fantastic!!! It made it seem so real!!! Example of your spelling mistakes were (She was fed up, but kept quite) and (They’re given it back). I think you were going to write she was fed up but kept quiet and they’re giving it back or they’ve given it back.
Characterization: 9/10
You manage this section beautifully. Your main focus was Soomi’s POV which is really good cause I could feel the way she was feeling. Your other characters were developed really well too. You manage to bring out all the characters without making it too draggy.
Writing Style: 9/10
I really like how you wrote the whole story. To me, sad stories brings out more mood and emotion and readers get to understand and feel more about the story. I really like your story a lot!!!
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Love it!!! Love the way you wrote it!!
Bonus: 5/5
Total: 92/100
OMG!!! I love your story so much!!! Can’t wait for your next fanfic!!! I love how the ending ended!!! So sad and touching!! I need tissues!!! Keep up the excellent work!!! J GAMBATEH!!!
