Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/end/
Author: UnknownViet
Reviewer: Sweet_YunJae @ Mystery Cious
Title: 5/5
Your title is very unique though I have seen it before. The end of a new beginning. It relates to the story so I gave you full points.
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Poster/Background: 10/10
I gave you full points because the poster is 100% related to the story. The flower and everything. Something tells me it’s like a piece of her heart, memory, that will never fade away.
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Forewords: 9/10
Your forewords was confusing at first, but then I soon catch on. But then again, it could of describe a little more about the two couple’s personalities and characters.
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Plot: 13/15
I seen this plot before, about a couple that had been through many arguments and soon broke free from their pains. I understands fully what this story portrays for I had, too, been through the same thing. But like I said, I have seen many stores, movies, etc. that have the same idea or plot.
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Creativity/Originality: 8/10
Like I said before, it wasn’t very original and I’ve seen it many times. But the way you wrote it is different, and for that it seems very new and it seems like you had felt the same thing.
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Flow: 9/10
The end of a new beginning. The flow is okay to me and since it’s the end of the relationships, there’s really nothing to judge about the flow.
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Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
You made some errors but not that serious. And besides, nobody is prefect and everyone make mistakes once in a while. Including me.
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Characterization: 7/10
I didn’t really have an idea of what the character’s personalities were. And I really couldn’t picture their character.
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Writing Style: 10/10
Very neat and I can picture the scenes well. Very detailed too.
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Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I got to say this was one of the best one-shot I have ever read. Though I seen many with the same idea, your story seem more unique.
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Bonus: 5/5
I can relate to it and I had a great time reading. Took me like a few minutes but I cherished it.
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Total: 90/10
