Author: blae_007
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/caller_in_love/
Status: completed (one shots)
Reviewer: mhiz.SUNSHINE
Title: 5/5
The title fit’s the story perfectly.
Poster/Background: 10/10
The poster and the background is absolutely beautiful. It matched the mood of your story and it really brings out the pretty colors. And I like how the designs of the background matched the poster. Awesome! 
Forewords: 8/10
You should have describe more on your main character, but since its a one- shot I guess its okay. I think the sentences you wrote were really good and interesting. It made me very excited to read your story.
Plot: 13/15
The plot was quite predictable from your title. But, this one I actually enjoyed. I haven’t read much stories with this plot. So, good job! ^^
Creativity/Originality: 9/10
I find your story very unique. It is very original and I’m pretty sure readers can see your creativity here. Great job!
Flow: 8/10
I find the flow okay. It’s not very dragging and not very rushed. I just think you can do better with this if you try and say more about the setting or the least, more about the characters.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 3/10
You have a lot of misspelled words that I almost couldn’t understand some parts of your story. Your grammar isn’t the best too. You have to practice more. And you should also check over what you typed. You forgot to include a lot of punctuation. But, practice makes perfect, right? (:
Characterisation: 8/10
I didn’t have anything wrong with this. But maybe you can try to describe the main character more.
Writing Style: 5/10
You also need to work on this. Remember to always indent when you start a new conversation. You shouldn’t bundle up the sentences when they are talking. It makes it very confusing.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
Your story was really enjoyable!
Bonus: 3/5
Total: 76/100
