Author: appleMIN, Anna
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/cry_AS
Status: completed one-shot
Reviewer: candycane@mysterycious
Title: 5/5
OMG!!! Your title suited your story like 100%!!! Your title was awesomeand unique!!!! I love it!!!
Poster/Background: 6/10
The poster was ok, the girl had very cute and big eyes!! So animeish!! I like the quotes on the poster!! But I’m not too fond of your background!! Personally, I think the colour didn’t quite suit the mood and the colour of your font was similar to your background. Its actually kinda difficult to read with the fond colour. Try a different colour for either the font colour or the background
Forewords: 9/10
Your forewords is really good!! Your prologue is amazing, it highlights the theme of your story. Though you could have formally introduced the major characters. Overall, it was great!!
Plot: 15/15
OMG!!! It was so good!!!! So touching!!! Not kidding!! I cried reading it!!! So sad!!! It really is imaginable and realistic!! So original!!
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
Never read a story like that!! And plus its a sad story, sad stories are hard to write. Because some writers were not able to reach to their readers. You’re amazing!!
Flow: 10/10
Awesome!! Brilliant!!! It connected perfectly!!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
Your vocabulary was awesome!!! Your spelling was perfect too!!! Really amaze and impressed!!! Excelante!!
Characterisation: 10/10
Anna is a great character!!! You described her character amazingly!! So touching!! I felt the her feelings!! Seriously!! I cried pretty badly!! Thisis like the first time I cired readind a fanfic!!
Writing Style: 10/10
Your writing is amazing!! No comments!!! Perfect!!
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Love it to death!! So sad!! *sobs*
Bonus: 5/5
I love your fanfic!!!!! So sad!! I feel so sorry for Anna!! So innocent, like a mockingbird!!
Total: 95/100
The only problem was your poster and background!! The rest was PERFECT!!! EXCELLANT!!! I’, really impressed!!! Keep up the amazing work!!! You’re a really amazing wirter!! Still crying!!! I feel Anna’s pain!!! *sobbing*
