Author: celestineblue ^_^
URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/evelyn_blue/
Status: Completed
Reviewer: ctanonymous @ Mystery-cious
Title: 5/5
It certainly is unique–It describes how everything was so strange, why everything happened, and it was good in portraying the romance part of your fanfic. Nice. (: (But do you mean, ‘It’s Fate That’s Playing With Us’?)
Poster/Background: 7/10
Well, your poster is very beautiful, and the expressions of the people match the story and mood and theme, and the title, so you’ll get a lot of points for that. But you’re lacking a background, so I’ll have to take points off for that.
Forewords: 8/10
It was well written. You showed her mistake of walking out of that house, and you portrayed her emotions wonderfully. I could feel her sadness, her misery, her regret.
Plot: 11/15
Good. I know this plot somewhere, other than others’ stories. But you did a good job adding components and making it interesting and enjoyable. I liked it, and it’s a quite popular plot.
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
Like many others, your story is not the most original in Winglin. I’ve seen plenty of storylines like this, and I even wrote one similar to it. But you added your own events and other things in it, so you’ll get some points for it. Additionally…I know this plot somewhere…So it’s not completely yours?
Flow: 9/10
You did really good in this part. The transitions weren’t too abrupt, and it wasn’t too slow or lagging either in most parts. You also focused on the relationship throughout the story and didn’t get carried away. Good.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
You had a decent level of vocabulary, that’s pretty good. You didn’t have much spelling or grammar mistakes at all in the story, but there were some. They were minor, though, and not that noticeable. One would have to peer closely and be really observant to notice them.
Characterization: 9/10
You did really good in this section. You showed significant things about the characters through their actions and dialogue, and I didn’t really have any questions about that. That’s something that I have to work on. Lol. xD
Writing Style: 10/10
I loved your writing style. It was smooth and readable. It wasn’t too bunched up or scattered, and I could read and understand it without a problem. Good job. It was simple and easy to read, and I liked it, even though it wasn’t that detailed.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I enjoyed it. I really liked the romance. ;D
Bonus: 5/5
Because it’s my favorite genre, and it was just good. (:
Total: 83/100
